Aurini-
I've never found your writing particularly hard to read. It's got a very strong apocalyptic feeling to it, and I can see that driving some readers away, but the way you use the language itself? You're fine.
Here's a paragraph I picked at random off your front page:
"Rape is not misogyny. It is bestial and psychopathic, the behaviour of a brute. A misogynist desires the love of a woman in his own sick way; the rapist pursues nought but hedonism."
A lot of words here are long, sure, like, "misogyny", "bestial", "psychopathic". But the sentences themselves are very straightforward. "Rape is not (a thing). It is (these three other things). A misogynist (does these things), and a rapist (does these other things)."
This clarity in your writing makes it easy for you to get your views across to your reader. The reader's focus is where it should be: on the ideas themselves, not the sentence structure. You also have a nice alliteration going with "bestial", "behavior", and "brute", broken up by the word "psychopathic" to keep it from getting too obvious. This is the ideal style for the kind of writing you're doing.
Rollo, on the other hand, is a god-awful writer. Most people don't realize it, because most people don't really analyze writing style when they read something. They just notice that it was hard to follow, or that maybe they didn't understand very well. Given Rollo's pseudo-academic posturing, a lot of people probably just assume they don't know about his "field of study" to fully comprehend it. Some probably just think that there's a lot of long words, jargon, and complex sentences, and so that must mean the author is really smart.
Here's a randomly chosen Rational Male paragraph: the opening to his hit piece on Roosh.
"Well I finally had a chance to watch Roosh vs. the bloggers – there are no journalists left in the world – debate (it was anything but a press conference) and it was about what I expected. Every opportunity these bloggers had was to call him on his beliefs and his position on the state of the world with the intent to dismiss, marginalize or ridicule him."
This is terrible, terrible writing. You could spend an hour talking about all the things he's done wrong here in just two sentences.
I'll skip the obvious ones, like the fact that there needs to be a comma after the word "Well". It's a blog post, and all blog posts have grammatical errors. It's a fact of life.
But even if you ignore the grammar errors, look how clumsy it is. There's not one, but two parenthetical asides in the first sentence. Overuse of parenthetical asides is a crutch for writers who can't organize their thoughts. It pulls the reader away from the main idea of the sentence.
Worse, the content of the asides is stupid. In the first sentence, he redefines two terms here: "journalist" becomes "blogger", and "press conference" becomes "debate". But both of these redefinitions are wrong! If you work for Martha Stewart Living, and they send you out to cover a press conference, you are a journalist. That's what the word means. And Roosh didn't hold a debate, he gave a press conference. He gave a short statement to the press, followed by a question and answer period. That's what a press conference is.
Rollo goes on to use the word "blogger" instead of "reporter" for the rest of his piece. It's weird and distracting. Occasionally, people at RoK will call particularly bad female journalists "typists", but that works because "typist" is an obvious word of contempt. Rollo himself is a blogger, so why is he using it as an insult?
If Rollo wanted to say that the reporters were unprofessional, and they were so argumentative that what should've been a press conference turned into a debate, he could've easily done that without inventing his own dictionary. Now whenever the reader sees the word "blogger" for the rest of the piece, he has to remind himself that, "Oh, they aren't really bloggers. Rollo just doesn't like them."
The second sentence is even worse.
"Every opportunity these bloggers had was to call him on his beliefs and his position on the state of the world with the intent to dismiss, marginalize or ridicule him."
This is a run-on non-sentence. "Every opportunity... was to call him on his beliefs"? Huh? What? But even if you were to fix that to something more reasonable, say, "These bloggers took every opportunity to call him on his beliefs..." It would still be a terrible sentence. It takes him 30 words to say, "The reporters were consistently dismissive."
Aurini, your writing is complex ideas, backed up by simple sentences. "There's a distinction between rape and misogyny. Here's how they differ." Rollo is simple ideas obscured by complex sentences. "I saw the Roosh press conference. Man, those reporters were a bunch of dicks."
I shouldn't have to say which one of these is better.
I didn't really realize how terrible a writer Rollo was until I actually went and looked. I remember reading his stuff in the very early days of the manosphere and thinking it was good, if a little academic. When I went back and actually looked I was stunned. It's not "academic", it's "pseudo-academic". It lacks precision and clarity of thought. It's squid ink intended to obscure, and make Rollo look far smarter than he really is.